Wow, incredible animation. Probably the best I've seen on the site. The atmosphere, sounds, pacing, characters, design, story, it's all perfect.

Really nice. I found it interesting that you let us pick a colour for the video, in a small way it helped connect the viewer to the story. The start was a bit slow, and although I think the ending was good - the animation was a bit stunted (if that makes sense). It would have been nice if the camera angle switched to Elvex or at least another view during the final scene I think, to break it up a bit since the raising of the gun was slightly awkward.

Pretty nice, fairly interesting although perhaps not enough as it does get repetitive. Also, I reached a level that was almost impossible due to the controls - the ability to jump off of the edge of a platform is very finicky.

Really high quality inking. The background effects are also done nicely and the composition works like a charm.